Manuscript

My first round draft and second round draft of the manuscript is complete.  It's a great feeling.  I sent the second draft to a best selling author to get his feed back.  His response blew my mind.  I read his reply a few times, and the more I read it the more it made sense.  I'm working on my third round draft edits.  I'm crushing the soul of Mr. Auker, my freshman English teacher and Jr. Composition teacher.  He gave me the love of research and writing long complex sentences.  Long complex sentences are a thing of the past. 

I'm refocusing my brain and channeling my inner Ernest Hemmingway.  I'm on a mission to complete this round of edits and have a polished manuscript by Sept 3rd.  I want to partake in an online event where authors and publishers and agents get together.  The author puts out there query and if the agent or publisher likes it, you connect.  It's a big day.  I have my work cut out for me.